[ When she was closer to get a better look, that's when she noticed the feature that stood out even more than just the guy's hair. A person with manners wouldn't be staring so intently. Yang was not that person, today.
She slid to a halt before him and leaned in, wincing. ] Ooh, whoa, that looks like it had to hurt!
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[ When she was closer to get a better look, that's when she noticed the feature that stood out even more than just the guy's hair. A person with manners wouldn't be staring so intently. Yang was not that person, today.
She slid to a halt before him and leaned in, wincing. ] Ooh, whoa, that looks like it had to hurt!